He's smoother than the water,
on a clear day, gentle
as the finest cloud cloth
Though he often sports
a gray veneer,
rumbling loudly
He's the silver lining she holds dear;
as close to strong and whole
as any human can control.
He's the best;
sincere as a teardrop,
sweet as a gumdrop
Intoxicating, he's
peppermint schnapps,
Irish whiskey, a daydream
and a mystery
With love for life never stopping,
passionately pausing
in yet another kiss.
He's at the top
of his game;
all this she knows
and his name.
A contest entry
- Have it in you? by Hectic Michelle.
600 points, ended December 9, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Such a beautiful poem with lovely imagery... soothing content you have woven so fine with this piece. Feels so romantic in essence. A total pleasure to read!!!
Thankyou for sharing!
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Thank you, cookie monster
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