I used spellchecker
on my heart,
it suggested:
- A new definition of love -
slightly
less amazed
after spellchecking yours
and it replied:
- No entries for the definition
of LOVE found -
Please tell me what you think
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I think you pose an interesting idea with this piece, but I don't find it very poetic, riveting, or of the degree of intensity I'm looking for.
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Spell Checker
The analogy of this on the heart is good. I translate this as the loss within the technology. Mistakes are good, and conquering love like conquering fear is important. Well done.
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splendid!another amazing poem of yours that just made my day!
bravo!
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wow...
wonderful!
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I really like the feel of "out of the box" persuasion here poet.
It matters not so much how the word is spelled but how it is defined. This is metaphorically sound poet. Life seems to be but a breath blown away without notice, if there is no love. A very clever take on the prompt. Thank you for this entry. I wish you the best in the comp, life, and LOVE!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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turning the page back...
without a mechanical measure to enter into, when we are less defined, we are more enveloped in spell checking than brandishing articles of truth where others still can not define who we are or where we've been.
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This is such a potent piece of thought. There is a depth beyond what the words simply say...
"I used spellchecker
on my heart,
it suggested:
- A new definition of love -"
Wow. I like that... Really; the whole thought of 'love' just eludes me. The definition is scarce to find solution, to reveal a hearts' intent. Thought provoking to say the least.
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