"Life is good,"
he said
"If you don't weaken"
I wish there had been more,
telling me a partner lightens the load,
and to serve with kindness.
Life is good.
In a list
A contest entry
- Prompt Quickie! by poetryality.
1500 points, ended December 4, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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That's an appropriate axiom and very true. Happy trails.
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Yes indeed, "a partner lightens the load". Your poem is simple but sure! My husband has given me so much of his insight, and wisdom. Life is good, and all the better when we embrace each day as if tomorrow will not come. An excellent take on the prompt my friend. Thank you for this entry. I wish you all the best in life, and this Comp.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Renee, thank you so much for your kind words and compliments on this piece, thank you for holding yet another inspirational contest that helps me learn and practice. God Bless! -Kenlo
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Wow,
A very potent piece within few words.
Thanks for sharing here, and all the best in contest!
-Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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Timothy, thank you for the compliment and for reading this work. - K
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