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I only want to live

I am simply myself
no more and no less
and I want only to be free
from these constraints holding me

I only want to live
my life as I see fit,
not to live my life not fighting to be free
from these constraints holding me

I will not be submissive,
to be told who I am and who I will be
I will not be told to not break free
from these constraints holding me

I will not live within these confines
of such a small world they have shown me,
I have discovered I am the only one to rescue me
from these constraints holding me

I am simply myself
no more and no less
and I want only to be free
from these constraints holding me

I only want to live
the life I dream of having,
so different from the one prescribed to me
from these constraints holding me

I will not give up,
I will never tire of this struggle-
life is not worth living, if my only comfort comes
from these constraints holding me

Author notes

“I am simply myself. No more and no less. And I want only to be free.” - Ashe, Final Fantasy XII.
very modified version of a Kyrielle.

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  • scentedrose
    May 8, 2008

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    very nice write, I can relate to your feelings here but find that there is in life someone somewhere that can help some how.


  • mourningmonday
    December 4, 2007

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    nice. i love how you used to quote within the poem, and the repitition to get your point across. good job and good luck.