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My Father



Father in you I have my hope
My reality for my life
Without you I cannot cope
For my soul is filled with strife

You are my only eternal joy
In you my soul rejoices
Your love I will enjoy
For all doubt you erase

I’m reaching out to touch you now
Of your strength I would borrow
At your feet please allow
As to our majesty I bow

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  • ShelleyA gold member
    January 17, 2008

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    A beautiful heartfelt write. Lovely depth of feeling. Your faith shines in this piece. Lovely words of hope, love, praise and adoration to our Lord. Well penned. Congratulations on winning Bronze. Well deserved.


  • second-born
    December 14, 2007

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    This is so wonderful...you captured the essence of how should we praise and thank our Father for all what He has done for us...congrats on the bronze!


  • HaleighGrace
    December 5, 2007
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    Beautiful

    This is a beautiful poem troyias


  • C.o.g.
    December 4, 2007

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    Very beautiful and great picture and presentation a very good piece. A wonderful way to tell the reader about our father in heaven! I loved it

    God Bless


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    December 4, 2007

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    BREATH TAKING

    Such beautiful words of faith and love...to give so completely to our Father is find the truest happiness...I am so moved by your words

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