I can't help but realize
How much agony you put me through
Your ways were those of a child
Mean and immature
You agonized me throughout the day
I can't believe I stuck with you
You were the worst for me
And everyone could see it
But I loved you
And couldn't see the agony I was going through
Now I realize
You were my worst problem
No way can I do that again
The way you can agonize me
Without me realizing it
I'm through
...
But then why do I love you still
Author notes
word: Agonize... hope you like it
A contest entry
- Welcome to My Word...Won't you come on in 2 by RuthKephart.
600 points, ended December 18, 2007, 13 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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There are pro's and con's to every poem. The con for this one is I think that MAYBE you used the word agonize a little to much. And the pro is ... well, the rest of the poem lol. I really liked it alot. But it felt like I was reading the same thing over and over a little. But great job!!!
Megan -
Oh...how hard it is to come to those realizations and then to discover that you still love the person that has put you through so much. It is hard to let go and to move on. As they say, " Sometimes the devil we know is less frightening than the devil we do not." A great take on the word prompt here
Thanks for the entry and best wishes in the contest
Ruth
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