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beyond

The last droplet of pain
Vaporized beyond the stratosphere of memory,
When I said “hello”, this morning.

For long, I have been trying
To please you
To please me

Smiling, walking and talking
Like a man, I never was
To placate someone, who wasn’t…

A figment of imagination
Can be a universe unto itself –
We love, forget, repent
and recreate images.

As a distant mirror cracks –
Its shards tear the sense of time
in my heartbeat

it’s a different world
than the image of past
where people like me
can live for themselves

and so can your memories;
they’re finally free…



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  • MargaretG
    December 5, 2007

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    Freedom

    is the hope and ideal of everyone. Many have the same kind of chains: expectations, reputations, all illusions. You describe them and shatter them - well done.


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    December 4, 2007

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    this was soothing to read i like how you expressed the fredom of setting free memories i tell you for me its a relief i enjoyed your story


  • Mari Goes gold member
    December 4, 2007
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