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thoughts one evening

the sky glowed
pink and orange
on blue and grey
a chilly wind blew east

i sat alone
writing this
thinking about how cold i was
inside and out

it seems these moods
always make me feel more poetic
than i actually am

but the words i scribble
never seem to convey
how i really feel

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11/27/07

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  • eluse
    December 4, 2007

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    i love this, perhaps because I can recognise a lot of myself in it.
    please keep writing! there is so much sincerity and subtle beauty in your writing xxx