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In the abyss of my mind, lost in the thoughts of time.
I can't hear or see, for love has made me blind.
Can I really be doing this, can it even be alive?
Is it even what you want, or what we even need?
Has it gone on too long, and we just didn't see...

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  • serenity silvermoon
    December 5, 2007

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    first of all great back ground i loved it. i love your poem these are very good questens that everyone ask in life and feels thanks forsharing and god bless you forever ans always hope we cant be friends and i cant wait to read more of your poetry