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she loved something[just didnt know what]

she found him and thought wow {he's the one]
when really it was a love of lust she found
her heart was played and messed around
but still she stayed because she cared she loved him he was so right
[but it was the lust she found to love]
at time it gave her fright
she longed for more as days went on
it became an addiction as they talked side by side
she said she loved him he said the same
but at the end it was all just a game
he left her there alone one day
she new then this was all a play
an act a scean from once upon a dream
her love for him grew apart as lust still was the main scean
from messy hair to kisses of shame
this was no love game it was a lust game you see
that they both loved it tore them apart
when he was gone she reliazed it was love over lust
for he was still on her mind
she dreamed of him and those times
maybe it was an addiction of lust
maybe it was an addiction of love and trust
whatever it was she loved it
someting scary yet so safe
someting she'll never really understand
as she sleeps alone she still feels his hand...

Author notes

ok so this pretty much sucks and a lot of my new poems will cuase i havent been writing poerty so sorry babe i tryed..

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  • Emotionless-brat
    December 6, 2007

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    steph is right great poem doll keep this shit up dont take a long break like befor love bunches whore


  • whiterabbit.
    December 5, 2007

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    I really like this babe. It really shows the confusion in feelings that you can have for someone. I love the ending.
    xx