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Never as you...

Missing image

As blue as the sky,
and clouds suspend

over mountains,
the trees bend in unison

as wind below blows;

no matter my surroundings,

nor beautiful, magnificent views,

everything may be beautiful,

But,

never as you.

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That is because you can see inside of me...my clothes make no difference before your eyes.....Unknown

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  • Desire gold member
    December 18, 2007

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    Oh My Word!!

    Love this piece You have penned Beautiful!
    The images take the reader on a Journey
    by the hand
    through Your words

    Congratulations on Your Trophy win~
    -throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hooooooooooooooo


    Love the words...and clouds suspend...

    they sure do

    The background is Precioussssssssssssss~~
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart!!
    Best wishes to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • rhondasail
    December 18, 2007
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    Congratulations on your silver...so well deserved...Peace, Rhonda


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 17, 2007

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    no matter my surroundings,

    nor beautiful, magnificent views,


    everything may be beautiful,


    But,

    never as you.

    Ah..beutiful...and again I will say beautiful..


  • rhondasail
    December 4, 2007

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    Oh...just lovely...I have the sense of floating with this one...your background and image are evocative and support the text beautifully, though the words can stand on their own. Best of luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 4, 2007

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    Very nicely done, my angelic friend!
    I wish you all the very best in this contest and send you many hugs!!!
    ~Sandy~

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