Granting you was one of the best gifts
Almighty gave me.
Each of our kisses make promises
to each other.
You gave me the happiness
I have never expected.
And when I hug you I pray
"dear Almighty do not take this beautiful human being away".
Author notes
To my darling girlfriend who loves me madly.
A contest entry
- Pick your favorite prewrite by Loveandblessings2u.
600 points, ended December 10, 2007, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - IF only she knew by The Black Raven.
300 points, ended December 11, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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First I want to ask you to please not 5 star my comment, or comment me back in anyway at this time. I am trying not to find out who anyone is.
This is such a lovely poem. I am very glad that your girlfriend loves you madly. It really is a gift to be loved. I enjoyed your poem.
Thanks for entering my contest and good luck
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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very sweet
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