You tore my heart to pieces
And left me there to bleed
You took away your love
And said I had no mean
How could our love run cold
Was it because of me
Did I do something wrong
To make you want to leave
I don't understand
Is there something wrong with me
Maybe I could change it
Be more than I can be
Please don't leave me here
Crying on the floor
I'll do anything to make you stay
Just tell me, I'll do more
Still you walk right out that door
And pretend you don't hear my plead
You drove away
And Im still here, begging for my need
A contest entry
- A love that was never real but the pain after was by MysteriousMoonlight.
875 points, ended December 29, 2007, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Heartbroken by Love-Lee.
300 points, ended January 1, 2008, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is sad.but ti's such a good choice of words and i love it!
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SO VERY SAD
Your words pull the tears from my heart...To love someone so deeply you would give anything to hold their love...This is beautifully written and filled with emotion
...thank you so much for sharing with me
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