You walked in to my life
Shone over me your light
You took my fragile hand
Made me discover flight
You opened my eyes
And encouraged me to look
You were more than a fairytale
Or a prince in some book
You climbed over the wall
And fought back the thorns
You found me on the other side
So lost and so forlorn
You held me in your arms
And taught me how to cry
You became my everything
Though I'll never know why
You are my Angel
You've taught me how to feel
You've helped me through the darkness
Though I know not if you're real
You faced up to my worthlessness
And told it where to go
You made me come alive
So to you everything I owe
You're the one who makes me smile
The one who makes me laugh
You complete me, fulfill me
Of me, you're the other half
You are my flawed perfection
You are my fantasy
And all I want in this world
Is to have you here with me
You're my guardian, protector
And I know this to be true
You're all I ever needed
And my Angel, I love you.
Author notes
Option 2: "Friends are angels who lift us up when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly"
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Stunned
I have not got anything to say... This poem has me awe struck... Wow this is really truly amazing...
Good Luck
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Awe. ♥♥ So sweett, touching, and to the point. I also see another option in here, congrats on using more than one! Thank you for entering, this entry trulymad m heatr melt (and thats not something easily done my dear). The title fits perfectly. Thank you.
Good luck in teh contest!
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Judge Says
This is too cute! I love it, and it DEFINATLY shows me just how you feel. Though in the line "So lost and so forlorn", the second 'so' should be taken out..Because for me it ruins the flow a bit..I dont know. It could just be me! >.<
But I LOVE this poem!
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Thanks for the comment =]
I personally think it doesn't flow quite right WITHOUT the second 'so', could also just be me
Who knows!
Thanks again,
Hannu xxx
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this is beautiful Gypsy...and so sweet...i would feel very special if someone wrote a poem like this for me. it oozes a wonderful feeling of love and isn't too mushy or unbearable...great job.
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Thank you, it was for you
Ok.. so it wasn't...but you can pretend it was =] Haha
Danke againnnn
Hannu xxx
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