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putrify purity

insane surname mouth

forms a larger oval


virgin speech excluded

see only a large hole


locked in endless chains

women have sufferd alone


reflection of goodness

purity speaks for itself

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pose & dirty pretty/carole21

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  • whiterabbit.
    December 31, 2007
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    I like this. It's different than others that i've read. Thanks for entering


  • Tarja
    December 5, 2007

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    Not bad. I'm usually not a huge fan of such short poetry... but this really works well. I enjoyed the depth and the raw vibe. Thanks for entering and good luck.