the memories are killing me
I would give anything to just let it all be
I don't really know what is coming over me
and I don't know how to get away from this
I want to move on so horribly
I want to just walk away and pretend that none of it mattered
Everything I can remember
Everything I miss
it can not be exchanged for some other form of bliss
it just won't work
I will just have to fail
Stop letting me know every paralyzing detail
Stop telling me that you love me
when it doesn't feel real
I don't want to kiss you
I don't want to make some half of a deal
I don't want to sit here anymore
I don't want to live here anymore
in some sub section of your Mestophilies like head
I just want to get away
be like you,
I want to be the indistructable one like you,
and then I realize there is nothing I can do
It is a molding and never ending memory
Author notes
(47)Dashboard Confessional "Screaming Infidelities"
A contest entry
- [[60 songs]] be inspired by the lyrics--tbs, dashboard confessional, the used, brand new, pink floyd, etc.- by lysdarling.
900 points, ended January 21, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i liked the thought of this..& love the song. but it seemed a little awkward in places. i think maybe it might've been all the times you used "I". maybe try & refrain from using it so much, some of the lines could be rephrased to mean the same thing w/o using "I". i hope i'm not confusing you! as for the poem itself, i really liked it. i've had those same feelings before. thank you for entering. sorry it's taking so long to judge!
-lys
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yes I realized that after I wrote it, but thank you. At least the idea isn't horrible.
hope you had fun judging!
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