What A Deer

Dark nights ring in my ears,
Eerie cries linger near.
Blood splattered from one deer,
Atop this Cavalier.
His eyes registered fear.
All life has been deemed clear.

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prompt: 6 line 6 words/syllables....

yea well this is waht came out of it

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QUICKIE - Options 6 Lines 6 words/syllables per line... by VoltaicHypnosis. 333 points, ended December 5, 2007, 12 entries
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Whispering Wind
December 5, 2007

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This is so strange...for my daughter and I just hit the most beautiful doe...I have cried my eyes out!...rather I might say she hit us!...really messed up the hood of her new car!...In that moment there is complete fear on both sides...sighs...

VoltaicHypnosis
December 5, 2007

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Very good I like the consistant ryhme scheme! All six syllables, too, another good feature. BEst of luck!

x-Black-Butterfly-x
December 4, 2007

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lol this is a wonderful write mum which holds alot within with short amount of words. well done and best of luck

Griswold
December 4, 2007

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Road kill huh? I see way too many deer on the side of the road around here. A deer and a Cavalier? I thinkk the deer would win Love you baby...Scott

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