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counter my eyes

look into the soul of the eyes
it will set you free
see the person in the eyes
and it will be me
my eyes the gate way to my soul
the place were i see
a mirror doesn't show it all
not all can see
so i look for the one
the counter part of me

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  • DonSulliven
    December 7, 2007
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    wow. this is really, wow!
    this is lovely, your looking for the one who can see you for you.