Hot flashes, staring veins
Bleeding erupts in my brain
Fingers melting, dissolving fast
No chance I'll make me last.
Sucking for air, choking for breath
Wishing for my own death
Turmoil spinning, blood clot strides
Inside my throat, mucous hides.
I feel me dying, spin jumping quick
I meant room, not spin (my body's sick)
Checking edit as eyes flutter for life
God-forsaken, miserable, soul of strife.
Please tell me what you think
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this makes me think of how just maybe you are insane (i was reading your page just now!) and i love it this is dark in a way a OCD person might think so with that said you're my hero!
Sucking for air, choking for breath
Wishing for my own death
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I'm your HERO!!! WOWZAS! Lol.... Me. Insane? Whatever gave you that idea, love? *twitch twitch*
Thanks for the comment!!!
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Insanity knows insanity!!
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This is well amazing dark creepy gets my skin crawling well done much love
.I know the answer to are you all right so I wont ask that hugggles amazing piece much love
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oh wow this uh
actually kind of scares me
more than the serial killer thing
0.0
and thats tons
are you alright?
lyl
ps. me likes XD
pps. why do i always do these?
ppps. *sigh*
pppps. wow i really have no life
ppppps. the ps's make a pyramid
pppppps. A PYRAMIDDD
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Awesome write.
I love reading your poems, they are very good.
Keep up the good work, cant wait to read the next one.
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wow... interesting... i really like the way that you write.. wish i could write like this... but i cant... i write more depressing poetry... dont know why... just comes easily to me... anyway.. good write...
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I love it...I love your writing....your so good at it....
you deserve clappies....yay!!!! 2 of them...no 3...you get 3 clappies
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