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Empty on A Tuesday

maybe this emptiness

can't compare to yours

but it's still empty all the same

 

 

 umbrella over head,,

  can't keep the rain off my ((star)) stained

                                                        skin

&& i can't keep your name from running

     through my head

over&over&overAgain.

 

                              [[ it always leads back to you ]]

 

im like a kid in a candy store;;but a

teenage disaster with an eating disorder.

 

.imissyouSOmuch

 

but you wouldn't

believe me if i told you

 

and I Think Thats Whats Bothering Me The Most

 

♥

 

Author notes

sn:Crash Into Me

lovely contest dollface.
♥

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  • yael
    January 17, 2008

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    "maybe this emptiness
    can't compare to yours
    but it's still empty all the same"

    i like that a lot.


  • Allure of a Rose
    January 9, 2008
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    Whoa, just knock me down, gorgeous, && then with the barrier keeping me from getting up.
    Brutality at its finest, I'm sure.

    Quite impressive, love.


    I fucking -love- these lines:

    " umbrella over head,,

    can't keep the rain off my ((star)) stained

    skin"


    Awesomeeeeee.



    I love you.


  • whiterabbit.
    December 5, 2007

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    This is really wonderful and so sad. I love the emotions in this, it feels so raw and real. Thanks for entering.
    xx


  • XXXDark--AngelXXX
    December 5, 2007

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    Wow...I'm Speechless. This is just umm wow I don't really know what to say. Great Message within it though.


  • Menace
    December 5, 2007
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    Ooo...

    You've made me proud. I just might have someone to contend with after all. lol

    • Crash Into Me
      December 14, 2007
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      oh really now??
      ((im blushing right this moment))

      that means a lot..
      seeing as you are totally Better in the writing department.


      hehe
      ♥ ♥
      [[alexsis]]


  • xXLucid-CatalystXx
    December 4, 2007

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    amazing

    this was astounding, and profound......it leaves me breathless. best of luck.....


  • Mildew in PinK tile
    December 4, 2007

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    this is so on my list.

    i feel EXACTLY the same and its tragic. thanks for speaking the words for me hunnie bunnie

    ♥ ILY


    • Crash Into Me
      December 4, 2007
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      awwww.
      thanks dolly face!!
      you should check out the picture i put it up now.
      ♥

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