"It's just another funeral
On just another day"
The man said as he saw the group dressed in black.
He walked towards the other end of the cemetary
And continued to cut the grass,
Attempting to not disturb the distressed group.
He went about his usual routine,
Trying to keep the cemetary looking nice,
While the group finished with
Just another funeral.
Author notes
meh, not that good. I'll finish when I get a chance. Class is almost over right now.
A contest entry
- Quickie by Exodus.
700 points, ended December 6, 2007, 9 entries
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Comments
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Short, simple but still hard hitting. A very interesting use of the prompt, though I think you could have chosen a better title. Thanks and good luck
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i think its very good
it shows how unsensitive we are today
and how we dont want to admit it -
actually this is pretty good.
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Not that good?
Sonya,
I love it.
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