Fragments of fantasy, strewn wistfully across a plain of despair.
Shards of hope taken effortlessly by the winds of change.
Too often and too scarce are the glimmering droplets of dreams.
Spread too thin throughout the uncertainty of the universe Like shooting stars...
Author notes
This one is definitely meant to be interpreted as you see fit. I think the real beauty of it is in it's versatility.
Hope you enjoy it.
A contest entry
- Best Allpoetry Poet of 2007! Round 1! by Salt Therapy.
300 points, ended December 15, 2007, 24 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
responce?
Comments
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i really enjoyed reading this poem! there are so many ways it can be interperated, and that is what i like about it. u r a very talented writer! keep it up!
~caroline -
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:D
Aw, thanks so much for saying so.
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I see what you mean
If I beg a little, will you do it. I want the best of the best. Please, hit me with your best essay
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awwwwww wow! 0.o
how are you so good? lol
wonderful write, and keep it up!
your going on my favs. yippie, new addition ! lol
take care
stephanie =)
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Hey thanks : )
It's always nice to get a comment like this. I get uppidy when I hear that someone has taken an interest in my writing. I'm really not much of a writer, it's just something that I do from time to time. I'm so glad you like it though
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lol. welcies again
yeah, it is nice to hear, makes you feel appreciated, which is always good ^_^
uuhh! now thats no fair, you should write more! lol
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Dear poet, thank you for your time in entering my contest. I wish you all the luck in moving onto the finals. All finalists will be added to the finalist list, and be notified on the contest page after judging. All entries will be judged fairly
Wow. Just... wow.
I hope you would like to see my interpretation on this? Since I am the judge...
This is what I see:
line one: a plane crashing on a rainbow colored ground. I absolutely love the words strewn and wistfully, brownie points for that. They were woven wonderfully in this poem.
line two: the wind is left angry, feeling betrayed, so it causes the crash, leaving shards of broken hope to rain upon the world.
line three: too many a time are dreams interrupted by reasons without understanding
line four: good dreams are left behind, lost in a world we'll never know
Whether i'm right or not I loved this poem!! ~ Kerri -
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Your comment absolutely made my day, er my early morning I suppose. Your synopsis was fantastic, and your praise was enough to make me want to blush. I'm positively tickled that I was able to make silver in your contest. Thank you for being so kind
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aww.. this is raelly nice... i love the last line... plus i really like the title : EMPHASIS AND FALSE HOPE.. its all lyk: DAN DAN DAAAAAAAAA!!! haha... well keep on writing!!!!
xoxo
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Well thank you for saying so, I'm always a big fan of feed back from others. I don't think I'll ever really stop writing, or at least I hope not
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wow this is really descriptive, I really like it. As soon as I saw you had a new poem I just had to read it. It was really good, good job!! =)
as always
(stay golden),
gabi
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