Revere the River!
He is a Teacher!
One who is Silent,
Only can Listen!
One who Listens,
Only can Teach!
The Silent River-
Listens more…
Teaches more…
He Never stands by,
He Never puts by
For his own-
He forever flows and flows…
To teach the Truth,
Wherever he goes!
Retaining is not his Nature!
Reflecting is his Nature!
He reflects the Reality!
The Reality of Life!
May be sad or glad,
He reflects only the Truth!
One who doesn’t understand-
Feels him an Obstacle!
One who uses properly-
Cleanses not only one’s body-
But also one’s Soul!
Learn from the River!
Learn from the Teacher!
Learn the Truth!
A contest entry
- 100 poems, more points to come! by katie-jo.
900 points, ended January 18, 2008, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Have you ever learnt from the River?
Comments
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I'm not entirely sure I understood this at first, but the second time I did, and the third time I was able to analyze it a little. Your style is very unique, you show that sometimes the truth gets in the way, but it is still important. Delightful.
Thank you for entering and all the best in the contest!
Happy New Year!
~kate-flamingo -
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Glad!
Thank you for your immediate comment on my poem. Thanks for the opportunity. Thank you for your wishes too.
Wish you a vey Happy New Year!
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Interesting poem. Engrosses the attention.
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very unique wrting style,it makes you think, the truth can be an obstacle, when no one else seems to care. your writing is a delight. God bless
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