Worries thrown to the wind
As Your hands lovingly wrap me in warmth
Mindless pleasure is offered to me
Only asking my soul as payment
my freedom is measured by pain
Pleasure that You willingly inflict
Not able to move freely
Sets my spirit soaring
You comfort me with rubber binds
You chase my fears with knives wielded
You capture my heart with tears of aching
You christen me Your pet with adoration
i am bound to You forever more
Never asking for reasons or explanations
Your command is my will
As my heart trembles at Your touch
i will be eternally Yours
Author notes
Tattboy:
For You my Love - thank You for accepting me,
Forever Yours,
In a list
A contest entry
- The Words That Bind... by ReachingForStars.
875 points, ended April 5, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is so beautiful and sincerely adoring. I love how you played with the words in the third stanza, it was BRILLIANT!
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your thoughts are those that only a true AND loving submissive could only understand.
the words "i am bound to You forever more" are ones that mean more to those of us that accept this lifestyle than those that do not.
BRAVO!
**Master Ktulu**
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BRAVO!
I have found that all I read of yours in this category is something that I can relate too immediately. It is beautiful the way you are able to express the bond that exists here. Thank you.
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Jutice indeed...
This is a wonderful poem; such wanton lust... this leaves me dripping wet wanting more!
Your words enter me and play with my sexual spirit!
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This is pretty spectacular C!!! I agree with Tatt. Your work sometimes just comes and hits me on the head with a hammer. This was a great pic and you definitely did it justice.
Well done my friend. -
If I had anything to do with it you would definitely get the gold for this one.
It was beautiful My darling.
It had a very strong opening too "Worries thrown to the wind
As Your hands lovingly wrap me in warmth"
YLM
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Very powerful write, Chantell. Powerful imagery and emotion expressed in this piece. I have nothing critical to say about this. A wonderful write. Good luck in the contest.
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Wow! Chantelle, this is a breathtakingly beautiful piece. You've certainly done the picture justice, and then some
Superb penmanship Dear
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wow
Well Chantell you certainly have got it right again, Im sure that D will love this piece and the sentiment it portrays.
Good luck in the contest,
Lisa
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Hot piece here. Good luck. I liked the alliteration here.
Thanks for your comment
All the best
Pozo
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Wonderfully written, a beautiful dedication from pet to master. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter my contest and I wish you the best of luck.
Bravo
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