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Blasphemy in so many words

He is the definition of perfection,
nothing can touch Him.
He walks on water, and turns
water into wine.
His voice is the truth
His being is honored,
His wisdom cherished.
He is the definition of perfection.

He's the sympphony of the Gods,
the statue that everyone stares and looks at.
He's the one that they all envy,
but can't copy.
Many lay at His feet,
and beg for the wisdom that freely
flows from His mouth.
Listening to the river of beauty
that flows.
He is the gold, frankincense and myrrh.

He has etched the true definition of
life and beauty into the hearts of many.
The will and want to live exudes from Him.
He's the truth, love and light in life.

He's saved my life,
breathed positivity when the world went black,
laid his hands upon mine...
and hypnotized me with his words
He is the essence of the world.

Author notes

No. It's not jesus...he's in fact a real person. This has so many religious things in it that it makes me wanna go to church.






But I won't.

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  • Quad cannon
    December 6, 2007

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    Brilliant

    This was a magic piece of work!!! Good luck


    I love the way you set the scene and used references...


  • Vampyric Kitten
    December 4, 2007

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    Haha almost got scared that you went religious on me there hun. A very interesting poem but who is it about?

    Kitten~*


    • hear her breathe gold member
      December 5, 2007
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      i didn't mean for it to be so fucking religious ( blech) it just sorta happened! ha ha ha. But it's about my band teacher/papa/mentor...

  • creationsfromheart silver member
    December 4, 2007
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    LOL at wanting to go to church hehe,

    I enjoyed the write ememnsley, it is beautiful and love is so amazing when its so right!

  • Rhyming From Rehab gold member
    December 4, 2007

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    This is very beautiful and yes sounds like you have found someone with a beautiful soul. This is always pleasing to me to see love expressed in many ways, and your heart shines in this one brightly. ~blessings to you always~ Trisha


  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 4, 2007

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    Wow,

    I like what you've created here with your talented soul.
    You are very bright, and gifted.
    Thanks for sharing your poetry, and please pen on.

    Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~


    • hear her breathe gold member
      December 4, 2007

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      Thank you! I have no idea where this came from but I have been thinking a lot about this particular person and I thanked him and God for bringing us together, even if the circumstances weren't totally awesome.

      Thank you thank you!

      Rosita
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