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Guiding Angel

Guiding angel through the dark lit
Forests of a fearful spirit.
Guiding angel to hold her hand,
Lead her to a brighter land.
Guiding angel, heaven sent
Though seeming weaker, evanescent.
Guiding angel, you are not so
You are where mortals dare not go.
Guiding angel in the darkness
Fend off demons with your brightness.
Guiding angel, keep her safe
This lost child, this forlorn waif.
Guiding angel, spread your wings
Shield her from the cold world’s sins.

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    March 24

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    Lovely thoughts & sentiments
    in this.

    A wonderful read!

    Thanks for entering & best of luck


  • RareFlower
    December 28, 2008

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    wonderful rhyme

    beautiful words portraying exquisite imagery. Lve the wording and the depth of write. thankyou for sharing and goodluck.
    RF


  • ThisIsMyWonderland
    June 22, 2008
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    ...I am speechless best rhyming poem I have read in a while. 9/10


  • Blooming Poet
    May 8, 2008
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    wow, this is brillant. I really liked it. Congrats on all the trophies.


  • Over and Done
    April 1, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry

    Angels do the bidding of the Father. Seek His guidance and He will send us all we need whether it be angels or hope. Thank you for sharing your faith with us.

    God Bless
    Tammy


  • j-ay rose
    March 31, 2008
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    thank you for entering my contest.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 10, 2008

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    Wonderful Poem Thank you for entering this into my contest Congrats on the Gold.


  • leander Moderators member
    February 21, 2008

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    This is quite a good poem that you have written, though I'm not really a big fan of repetition. I think that if you would remove some of the 'Guardian angel'-s, that it would add to the power of this

    Leander


  • AngelDreamer
    December 17, 2007

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    wow.the reputishan is nice and the picture it paints has a good message. the diffrent word skems make it verry interesting and keeps you reading. great job.
    (returning comment on: life.)


  • Sean Logue
    December 11, 2007
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    Like it.

    Like it...well written.


  • carmel apple
    December 9, 2007
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    I really like this one. It is to the point and everything. I really like how its mostly short.


  • Tarja
    December 5, 2007

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    This was fantastic! I PERFECT way to describe the picture. I really enjoyed the sense of faith and warmth I felt while reading this and the beautiful word choice and subtle rhyming. Well done! Good luck!

  • Bob Fox
    December 4, 2007

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    That Angel

    Where is she/he when we need them. But you have painted a picture of what I would like my angel to be like

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