Guiding angel through the dark lit
Forests of a fearful spirit.
Guiding angel to hold her hand,
Lead her to a brighter land.
Guiding angel, heaven sent
Though seeming weaker, evanescent.
Guiding angel, you are not so
You are where mortals dare not go.
Guiding angel in the darkness
Fend off demons with your brightness.
Guiding angel, keep her safe
This lost child, this forlorn waif.
Guiding angel, spread your wings
Shield her from the cold world’s sins.
A contest entry
- 93rd Contest by Ashleigh London.
450 points, ended December 5, 2007, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I need prayers and inspirational writes. Judged by RedwingSpirit.
4941 points, ended March 10, 33 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prayers for Allpoetry Members by Over and Done.
1200 points, ended April 1, 18 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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...I am speechless best rhyming poem I have read in a while. 9/10
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wow, this is brillant. I really liked it. Congrats on all the trophies.
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Thank you for your entry
Angels do the bidding of the Father. Seek His guidance and He will send us all we need whether it be angels or hope. Thank you for sharing your faith with us.
God Bless
Tammy -
thank you for entering my contest.
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Wonderful Poem Thank you for entering this into my contest Congrats on the Gold.
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This is quite a good poem that you have written, though I'm not really a big fan of repetition. I think that if you would remove some of the 'Guardian angel'-s, that it would add to the power of this
Leander -
wow.the reputishan is nice and the picture it paints has a good message. the diffrent word skems make it verry interesting and keeps you reading. great job.
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Like it.
Like it...well written.
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I really like this one. It is to the point and everything. I really like how its mostly short.
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This was fantastic! I PERFECT way to describe the picture. I really enjoyed the sense of faith and warmth I felt while reading this and the beautiful word choice and subtle rhyming. Well done! Good luck!
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That Angel
Where is she/he when we need them. But you have painted a picture of what I would like my angel to be like
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