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Quiet Night

In the quiet lonely night
the air stirs slowly to
a warm breeze that
pushes back the chill
I wait, something,
unknown.

Will it come to me?
What will it be?
Who am I to wait?

in the quiet lonely night,

does anything matter
at all?

A short musing poem, does the reflected/repeated line work?

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