symmetrical disparates
snowflakes are falling
scintillating stars
symmetrical disparates
snowflakes are falling
symmetrical disparates
snowflakes are falling
In a list
A contest entry
- Winter Haiku by Swan song.
480 points, ended December 5, 2007, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Infinituple Haiku by Pollycheck.
600 points, ended April 10, 2008, 100 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for entering my haiku contest.
scintillating stars
symmetrical disparates
snowflakes are falling
This is a well written haiku that paints a very vivid picture. -
congrats on the HM! this was great! have you ever tried to catch a snowflake? i used to when i was little. I would catch them in my hands and they would disappear! Then my parents told me the reason "disappeared" in my hands was that they melted. i was sad so my mom taught me how to make paper ones! this haiku made me think of all of that!
~NineTailedFox
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Lol....it's probably been a while longer ago for me but I think I was the same...they looked so beautiful wehn they landed on your hands and then they would just disappear. Thanks again for the nice comment as well as the visit..gonna keep me busy tonite huh?
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lol yes i think i will...i can't stop reading your poems! they're just that good! you really have a gift!
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i can see why this won hm
it was beautiful
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Thank you s much again..justa quickie..lol
Evan
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this is a gorgous and beautifully written haiku. i loved the imagery that was presented within it. well done
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Thanks so much for visiting this work and for the nice comments left in it's page,
Evan
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ooooh so very lovely
Tasha
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Thanks so much for looking at this work and for the lovely comments left on this page, both truly appreciated,
Evan
oopsie..lol..
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This is a heavenly haiku you have done on the beauty of a snowflake. You created wonderful images with those 17 syllables and I congratulate you for the Honorable Mention you received. This is beautiful. Thank you for sharing with me and keep writing poet. seamaiden ♥
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Thanks once again fro visiting one of my woorks and for the wonderful comments you have graced this page and work with, both truly appreciated,
Evan
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Heh
For a haiku, I really really liked it. It's funny, how you can think seven words are really nicely written -
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thank so much for stopping in and commenting on this pen. Just really started doing haiku's a couple weeks ago and find them a fun and interesting chllenge I guess and not quite the mind strain of mt typical 50 and above poems...lol. thanks again for teh nice comment,
Evan
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This was a really nice holiday haiku to read. I really enjoyed it and congrats on the honorable mention
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thanks so much for visiting this work and the nice comments left here with it,
Evan
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Wow I don't know how you can paint such a wonderful picture in so few words but you have done it well. Thank you for sharing your wonderful gift!!
Lauren
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Thanks once again for your gracing my pages with your visits and the wonderful comments you have left upon this page, both are truly appreciated as always,
Evan
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This is a very pretty haiku! I love how every line started with an "s" and your use of vocabulary. Congrats on the Honorable Mention!
Always,
Cassie
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Thanks for visiting and for the nice comments you have given this work,
Evan
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So beautiful! I envy people who are able to take a few words and craft something beautiful out of them, and this certainly is that. I love snow and snowflakes, and this made me see a snowy scene that we've only had once this winter. I miss the snow so this one really came close to me. Beautiful, beautiful work!
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Thank you so much for your visit to this page and for the wonderful comment you have left here with it,
Evan
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Short , Sweet , and to the point . the way it needs to be. you have great talent. you deserved the HM you got for this piece. thanks for sharing.
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Thanks so much for the visit and for the nice comment you have left eher with this pen,
Evan
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awsome Haiku!
Wish I was better at these, aw the struggles of a trained free write I am, I admore your talents in many forms of writing your rhyme my favorite
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Thanks as always for gracing my pages with your visits and comments. As always they are truly revered and appreciated,
Evan
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Wonderful Haiku Evan!
I love the feel of this one.
Congratulations to you on your
Honorable Mention and thanks a lot
for sharing your talent with us all
here! Keep it up my friend!
Jeremy0826
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Thanks once again Jeremy for this visit and for the very nice comment you have graced this page with. Your opinion goes a long way in my own satisfaction as always,
Evan
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Beautiful Winter Haiku
mr eb
much love
ephiphany
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Thanks once again for stopping here ti visit one one my pens as your visits are alwyas appreciated as are you comments,
Thanks again,
Evan
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I love this. It is snowing today! Great write"f
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A note of thanks for the visit paid to this work and for the nice comment you have left with it,
Evan
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ordinarily I don't really like haikus... they just aren't my style. but i liked this one. Short, simple, and sweet. It made me wish for snow...
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What a nice comment in that you normally dont care for Haikus but enjoyed this one and I guess thats a tribute that few can top, so many thanks for both the visit and for what you have graced this page with,
Evan
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nice little haiku wonderful for what it is ( :
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Wow. This was absolutely beautiful. You did a great job with the form and the imagery. Beautiful.
Congratulations on your trophy, should have been gold!
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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Thanks so very much for this visit to this work and especially for the wonderful comment you have left here with it, truly appreciated,
Evan
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Wow, glad I wasn't in this one, you would have dusted me...hahahaa congrats on the HM
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Ya, right...lol. I just keep looking for ones that are closing and that you haven't entered! Thanks so much for this visit and comment once again,
Evan
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this is a beautiful haiku, and one of the best descriptive writes on snowflakes.
a short and amazing pen.
Well written,
Sarah x
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Thanks again for gracing my pages with your visit as well as for the lovely comments left here for it as both are always appreciated,
Evan
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This is a very fine haiku and I enjoyed it very much well done and good luck.
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Thank you for the nice comment,
Evan
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beautiful
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Lol, damn near commented before I even had it posted! Thanks Cara for visiting once again and the nice comment,
Evan
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