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Isolation chamber

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It was a beautiful day in the country, so fair,
the smell of wildflowers lingering in the air.
My dog and I out for an afternoon stroll,
ran ahead barking as I crossed a grassy knoll.

Cresting the top, I see him running around,
some other kind of animal down there, I frown.
All of a sudden, a bark, yelp, sprayed by a skunk,
stinky stupid ass dog rode home in the trunk.


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Fragrance of Isolation.

Not really, but thats what my muse got from this prompt.
We have Skunks around here, I smell that unmistakable odor quite often. It's not pretty.


Love you Tory.

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  • Grey Mouser
    December 10, 2007

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    ROFL, that is one smelly combination, have to sanitize the trunk afterward too. Nicely written and great take on the prompt. Thanks for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,
    Mouser


  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 4, 2007

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    Wicked!

    Wowzer! Great take on the prompt, very unique. Made me laugh, luckily I have never smelt a skunk, we don't have them here but I guess they smell pretty rotten Wonderful little poem, best of luck in your contest


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 4, 2007

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    lol this is an intresting and different take on the prompt. it made me laugh and its very creative. well done and best of luck


  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 4, 2007

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    Well Done,

    Very creative piece for the given prompt!
    I wish you all the best within the contest bro!
    Thanks for sharing you, Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~


  • eyesofanangel524
    December 4, 2007

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    Interesting take on the prompt. Ever so witty. I found myself laughing out loud. Thank you. Best of luck in the contest.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    December 4, 2007

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    LOL, too fun and true...though not really funny when it happens...if you can even handle the smell in the truck, good luck!
    Very unique take on the prompt...love your sense of humor.
    Best always,
    mystic

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