Bouquet of loneliness
with a hint of silence.
Simplicity in oneness,
rare in desirability.
Purity in untouchable,
safety welcomes isolation.
Companion-less begins decay,
soul never allowed to emerge.
A contest entry
- prompt inspired, 16 entries, 8 lines by Grey Mouser.
600 points, ended December 11, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very well written on the regression a soul can undertake when not being used, lost to the isolation of loneliness. Thanks for entering into the contest.
Be well and be blessed,
Mouser -
Very well penned indeed! I love the wording, its such a sad poem. Very best of luck to you in the contest
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A paralizing thought!
A super message built by imagery and emotion strong!! Excellent choice of wording to grab the soul. To know that one must have others to be whole! Perfect, Don
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oh wow...
indeed...it does have a fragrance, doesn't it?
very well done!
Companion-less begins decay,
soul never allowed to emerge.
this is really truth...wrapped in poetic pretty...
great job with this write...love the opening of bouquet of loneliness too.
You go, girl!
It's sad we can pen these poems so true to life, isn't it? LOL
Blessings! Tammy
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Sis,
this is sooo beautifully sad. Not a place most of us wish to be, yet many of us end up in. You did a wonderful take on the prompt...so deeply felt and meaningful.
Best always, with love!
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