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Universe of thought





left in isolation of world
a precise knowledge to act to lie to deceive.

in immense solitude put my life out to let suffocate,
spheres false and filthy,
met fragrance in nature to purify me.

looked in universe of thought
transported between stars of firmament, green of nature, blue of sea
never a bird of this planet left without taking me …

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt: Fragrance of Isolation

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  • Grey Mouser
    December 10, 2007

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    Wonderfully written, great wording and very thoughtfully done. Beautiful imagery taking us on this ride. Thanks for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,
    Mouser


  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 4, 2007

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    Wow, fab write! Love the imagery you have used. I also loved the last line, great take on the prompt. Best of luck in your contest


  • eyesofanangel524
    December 4, 2007
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    Great imagery in this piece. Wonderful take on the prompt. best of luck in the contest.