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Come away

Searching for your soul
Through trials and failures
Times broken and empty
How little the embers
How much they consume

Come away, Oh come away,
Come away with me
I'll show you love you've never felt
Just open yourself to me

Shattered like glass
Like a breathtaking sunrise
A beautiful melody
The sun shining down
Love is in the air

Come Away, Oh Come away
Come away with me
I'll give you love you've never had
Open your heart and be with me

Troubles may seem more
Than the sand on a beach
But I will stick by you
And I will never walk away
All I desire is your heart

Come away, Oh come away
Come away with me
No words describe the beauty you hold
Your smile is a joy to me

Open your heart for a warm embrace
As love grows through our hearts
My Arms wide open with peace and joy
You've opened your heart to me
As I've revealed my heart to you

Author notes

Option 1
Option 2
Option 6

I believe it fits option 1 and 6, because This is an expression of how I feel about my wife, but it's also a reflection of how God looks upon us, he desires our hearts, he wants to heal us of our pains, I've found that the love in marriage is a reflection of Gods love for us.

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  • Whispers of Hope
    November 21, 2008
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    This is simply amazing enjoyed reading it!! You are truely talented!!


  • Forms of Me
    December 6, 2007

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    This is Beautiful!

    Josh,

    I have not been around much and I have not read any of your work in such a long time. I really liked this poem because it has such a beautiful dual meaning for you personally.

    God bless you,
    Liz