Beauty
Felt in her voice
Stirs my inner being
Immaculate tones inviting
Calm and serenity into my heart
Other familiar sounds fail me
Yet ever her words soothe
Bringing these ears
Beauty
Delight
She gives to me
Caressing my heart soft
In sweet ways unexplainable
Always intriguing my soul with beauty
With ever flowing silken means
Leading me towards light
Burning with such
Delight
Sweetness
Within this heart
Reserved for her honor
Singing softly undying hymns
Sublime melodies which never fade
So simply what a heart offers
Enraptured by moist storms
From the soul of
Sweetness
A contest entry
- Anything goes.. by IamRemy.
625 points, ended December 16, 2007, 29 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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great! the last two take on a really nice, crisp shape. They're all good though.
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Amazing
Very well done, constructed and tied together.
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aw wow this is so beautiful so full of depth and meamingfullness form your heart congratulations on your well deserved shiny I love this poem
maralisa
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I loved this. Diamonds and circular are my favorites. I do them as often as I can manage but it's difficult.
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Cerulean Sunrise
Hey you won Gold Congrats was very very beautiful
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A very heartfelt poem. No matter what you write about it is always amazing and even the holders of contests think so. You are an amazing poet, an amazing poem. And I loves you muchly big brother
Your words are always comforting xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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mmm what a yummy poem. That may seem inappropriate, but it really was. I loved it. And that's rare for me. Thank you for stirring me with a joy not felt easily.
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Wow... Mark... this is beautiful... by far one of the best I've read by you. It's so romantic... so sweet... so loving... who is the lucky girl that you have written this for? lol. Very nice. I love it! Meg
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kools
i likes this piece
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Such a beautiful, loving, and sweet write, my friend
I love romantic poetry and this is one at its' very best!
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This is such a very lovely piece of form!!! Truly thoughtful, and sweetly sincere. You weave such beauty into words, allowing a sense of sigh to escape your readers. Amazing write, Love it!
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this is a wonderful and powerful write bro. it holds the love and dedication within it and the imagery. well done
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I thought this was beautifully done, it flowed very well, and the imagery u used was very touching!! You know I'm a big sucker for Form poetry anyway!! This was divine!!
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