Bumpy skin dried out from cold.
Cried out to the circle's fire to warm up his mold.
Couldn't keep his cold meal down.
Could never hold gen u ine frown.
Teeth all teeth crunch together.
Swallowing the scruff of life's tasteless leather.
cloud clears for moments set still.
Rays of a light shave off some chill.
A contest entry
- Cheer Up a Depressed Girl by Snow-Flake.
630 points, ended December 14, 2007, 18 entries
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yikessssss
Holly Croc-o-diles!!!! I am horrified of them haha had a bad exsperiance one time when my step father talked me into going to fish with him in kissime Florida! He said no, there isan't crocs in that lake..... PFF he lied and they chased after our fish! LOL thanks for that memory now I'll have night mares..
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I wish I could put some kind of category on your stuff but its all so originally fresh, its hard for me even to comment without sounding like some kinda drone ...love it once again!
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you,
Larger ant keeping the line going. LOL
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I love your style! You really gave me the sense of the crocodile and the second line simply rocks!
You a metal lover?
Peace Georgia
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Hell yeah !
I just started to appreciate some of the older stuff Dio for instance love it!!! I love the Metal all all of it's Kin. Have you heard any of Tenaciuos D's music? They are the ones who started this whole new music affair with myself. "Metal...Metal.....Metal.............It comes from hell!".., Tenacious D.
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