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Words of Love

 

Words of love spoken,

the sound of your voice

never heard.

 

One moment with you

and your loving words,

shall last me but a lifetime.

 

 

 

 

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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    February 22

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    wow

    You said it, Wonderful flow and detail work. Oh I could add to this, ut its yours. And it is a beautiful piece. Very much a flaesure to read


    • freespirit51
      February 22
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      Golden eyes 25

      Thanks again for stopping by and reading. Glad you enjoyed. Please feel free to read anytime.


  • grannyeri gold member
    December 5, 2007

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    Sentiments well expressed in these lines - easy to read and understand how you feel about this someone special. Wonderful words convey love very easily.

    • freespirit51
      December 5, 2007
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      grannyeri

      Thanks so much my friend I am glad you understand my heart.


  • poetryality silver member
    December 4, 2007

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    The wonderful thing about love, whether it hurts or heals is its lasting affect on each one of us. A great take on the prompt. I wish you the best in the challenge.


    Much Love & Many Blessings ♥

    Renee

  • Suzanne Dia
    December 4, 2007

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    I've gotten a lot of love poetry in this contest. Interesting that those moments slow down for some when they fast forward for me.

    This is a sweet entry.

    Thank you.


  • Danna Hobart
    December 4, 2007
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    Lovely.


  • freespirit51
    December 3, 2007
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    Thanks my friend for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed it. It has very special meaning to me as you know.

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