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Tell Their Story

On that one CD
Emotions are poured out
Without embarrassment
Without care
Without pretenses

 

Voices shouting what

They cannot hold inside anymore

Telling the world they're not afraid of

Being honest with themselves

 

A true singer/song writer to me

Has the best life of all

Because they've pledged

To themselves that nothing

Will be hidden

Their pen and paper

With their beautiful voices

Tell their story

Author notes

PROMPT: secret ambition

Rest your soul now, 'cause music saves your life. (Hear A Song, Ian Love)

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  • broken.inside.xx
    April 30, 2008

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    this isn't, quite what I'm looking for, mostly because I wanted something from a first-person point of view,
    but this is still a wonderful write, full of emotion,
    and it conveys your talent.
    keep writing =]


  • Elenaliz
    March 10, 2008

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    true.true.i think it is one of the best lifes to live.this is pretty good.i like this because its about music,but its different.not about the actual music but about how its written and how awesome it would be to do that.but to me the poem doesnt say enough i think it would be better if it were longer with a little more emotion,a little more flow.to me its just written,just there.if you know what i mean.i still like it it just didint really move me.


  • MrsJones
    January 26, 2008

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    Wow, this was great. I love the inspiration from music, it's a powerful thing. Good work! Best wishes in the contest.


  • Emm Jayy
    December 19, 2007

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    I really enjoyed this. It makes me feel like... you can relate to the music. And that's exactly how it happens, because music DOES save lives. You've really captured that in your poem. Great job and good luck in my contest!


  • opaqueangel
    December 4, 2007

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    Excelent write and excelnet secret ambition! I really enjoyed reading this peice and really liked whta you have done with it! Thanks so much fro the entery and good luck in the contest! Keep up the great writting!

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