ashes, ashes on top of the snow
(and it all falls down)
i'm missing you more than you know-
sucking in pretty lies
and breathing out insecurities and I can hear you whisper in my ear.
god, I wish you were here
so I could fall asleep with you instead of this dirty little secret.
'cause alone i'm a mess and in your arms i'm at my best
better than any teenage emo kid could dream of being, anyway
(but i'm not ready to break those ties just yet.)
'cause this is all that I know:
blowing smoke into the wind and flicking embers on the snow
breathe in breathe out
and forget what I was thinking about
until the vulnerability creeps in and the doubt
and the doubt.
(counting down the days until I can see home)
and I can't hold my eyes open anymore
but I can't fall asleep alone-
'cause alone i'm a mess
and in your arms i'm at my best
and I swear i'm not depressed
(but I wouldn't say i'm okay just yet.)
Please tell me what you think
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Karl has left me feeling this way, so I know how you feel honey, it hurts and part of you doesn't know what to do either, what's for best etc. I love the repeat of 'cause alone i'm a mess and in your arms i'm at my best, really great line!
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Really good, you could really see you in this work; what I like also is your style in this: it reads like a rhyming free verse, that is just so cool. Keep it up, you have got a lot of talent!
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nice piece so far i have been impressed browsing the love list you artist just doing a fabolous job impressing me
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