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Child's play

Laughter is a shadow
of an higher purpose,
joy in life, happiness
in moments.

In its breach we are dry
like rising desert sand,
needy as parched sun baked ground.

In laughter
we defy mortality
see our angels so near
lighted upon softly
shifting shoulders;

and laughter brings a whisper
that echoes in another's ear
touching some need to reach
for floating feathers
tickling us at sight
as if we were children again..

and in laughter, truly we are.


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Laughter is the shortest distance between two people. ~Victor Borge

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  • judyjudyjudy
    December 10, 2007

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    This is both moving and light. I like the floating feathers and your observation on defying mortality. A well written write.

    Good luck.


  • Nicolette gold member
    December 3, 2007
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    I simply loved the opening lines of this poem... laughter is indeed what connects us, lifts us... it's the heart's sigh... beautiful poem and as always your poetry lifts and brings light - and I always leave your pages enriched... so thank you for that.

    ~ Nicolette


  • m2lost24get
    December 3, 2007

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    Laughter truly brings people together in ways unexpected and thought to experience. It brings out a youthful vitality of our spirits giving us reason to reach for newfound hopes and effervescent joys. well done and many blessings always xx