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Feel like crying

Feel like cry?

What do you done when you feel alone?

Just cry  and cry until you heart is nothing at all.

How do you feel when your alone?

Just keep hoping some one is out there.

What do you do when no one is home?

Just cry and cry until you cant see no more.

What would happen if you never woke up?

Feel like you are running in a dream you will never wake from.

Do you still feel like crying?

Is anyone out there?

Please tell me what you think

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  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    August 6, 2008

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    This is a great poem. I like it alot. It flows well through to the end. The last line is excellent ending.