the Christmas tree
gleaming brightly
so we silently
watch attentively
No presents there
It's all laid bare
No money nowhere
Yet we don't care
family's quiet embrace
dresses of faded lace
gratefully poor in disgrace
in this richest of space
Author notes
Well, I like rhyme, and I like Christmas. I only hope this stands up to what the contest calls for.
A contest entry
- TEN THOUSAND POINTS OF RHYME! (now 12,000) by cricketjeff.
1850 points, ended December 4, 2007, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what this makes you feel
Comments
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A very good poem, it's nice to see so many poets rhyme.
Thank you for your entry, please join us in one of the other contests, if not all. Thanks again..Sue

