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I cry because...

I cry because everyone dies,

I cry because they hurt deep inside.

I cry because they think their alone,

I cry because they're never shown.

I cry because of all the hate,

I cry because this is their fate.

I cry because everyone cries,

I cry because of everyones lies.

I mostly cry because they think of suicide,

So thats why I cry because no one is by their side.

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  • uniiquegirl
    December 3, 2007
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    I personally think that this poem had no profound meaning...It was overall cliché and the constant repition of I cry because made the poem boring and lacked originality and creativity..I think that more could have been done with this topic....there was also a few grammatical errors....Thanks for the read !