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Potato Chip

thick and salty
delicate crumble
of yellow slivers
into saliva

a thin film
so flavorful
deep fried.

"Betcha can't eat just one."

Author notes

The last line is the Lay's motto. Wheee. I tried on this, cause I was devouring innocent potato chips and saw the contest. Oh, the motto is in quotations because the Lay's motto isn't with "bet you," it's with "betcha," so I hope that spelling doesn't count.

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  • moluv10
    December 5, 2007

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    Makes me hungry! Congrats on the silver. Lays should change that to "Betcha can't eat just one bag". great job!


  • Lj-
    December 4, 2007
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    Yummy.

    Thank you for your entry,
    Best of luck.