Stop toying with my head.
You know I want you,
But you barely hear my voice.
The whispers in my mind tell me I'm crazy,
But my heart refuses to listen.
Just get it over quickly.
Kill my desire, or make it real.
This battle is begging me to calm,
But no matter how hard I try,
I can't stop thinking of you.
Can't you see, you're driving me insane.
Please, oh please have mercy.
Just get it over quickly.
Kill my desire, or make it real.
There's something wrong with me,
And you're the source of the problem.
Get away from me, get out of my mind.
Take your temptation and hide from me.
Only promise me this:
Just get it over quickly.
Kill my desire, or make it real.
Author notes
This is a poem (incase you didn't know
A contest entry
- [PIF] Anything Contest by brittany.geeze.
475 points, ended December 18, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great poem
The repitition is really effective here, and like the way the last verse makes a mushroom cloud with the lines 
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You spelled Desire wrong in the Title.
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well penned, good luck
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I think it's brilliant. I really enjoyed it, and it can deffinately be related to.
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Wow
This is exellent because it hilights the damage an unhealthy relationship can cause over time. I' ve known many people in them and it does niether one good in the end.
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I like it because I think it's very easy for me to realte to, and for many people to relate to. It's easy to follow and entertaining to read.
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Congratulations- you won gold trophy!
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