You sent chills down my spine
The moment you looked at me
Was a moment in time
I froze in my tracks
A lifetime sublime
A contest entry
- a moment by Suzanne Dia.
450 points, ended December 4, 2007, 13 entries
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Gosh! Is he ever one fine man.
Makes me think of the time I did an Extra role in a movie Denzel Washington was directing here in Cleveland. He held my hand to tell me what he wanted me to do, (movie wise for the shoot) and I damn near passed out. I feel you on this one gurl!
Excellent!
I think I'll sit here for a while and just stare at your page.
The best to you in the Comp!
Much Love & Happy Holidays ♥
Renee
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Lust at first sight, well at least as far as Clooney is concerned
Love at first sight too
My experience has been that those moments speed up, they never last long enough, but this is a nice entry
thank you
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the trick is to link the moments...lol
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eerie....!
How strange he looks just like me...! Thump! Sorry I just fell out of the chair laughing at myself... Well written as usual my friend. Good luck in the contest!
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There is a striking resemblance...lol
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The guy in the chair looks just like my brother when he was in his 20's, except my brother's eyes are blue.
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Blue is nice...lol
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It feels a bit cliche to me.
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george clooney, now we know don't we
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I thought you knew?...lol
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i didn't but i do now boo hoo xx
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