Worried,sad and depressed
Fearfull and feel alone
I visit here to hide
Put the world aside
Enter my memories
Back to better times
Feeling good here inside
A wonderous space to abide
May just stay here
And never more
Reality to restore
I am here by the door
Please help me,before
I can no longer decide
And life long
Remain on this endless
Confusing coaster ride
A contest entry
- [PIF] Anything Contest by brittany.geeze.
475 points, ended December 18, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I'm sure it must be tough dealing with this and you expressed yourself wonderfully in your poem. Best of Luck.
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Alzheimers is a horrible disease for the family of the diseased, but I like the view the poem is in.
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I really like your wording in this, even though for me, it is hard to read as my mother has Altzheimer's - and I am on the other side on this confusing coaster ride - and it is terrible.
But, all in all, the wording was good, it read nicely.
Good luck in your contest.
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Wow, this is really good. This is exactly how I feel. I wish sometime that I could just disappear from the world and go into my head. Life would be much easier that way. Very good write.
Alyssa
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