Like lightning, the memories flash by.
but the few that remain
are meant to last.
These are the moments
From Summers past.
A contest entry
- a moment by Suzanne Dia.
450 points, ended December 4, 2007, 13 entries
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i like this one! short sweet and to the point. perfect
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhh me liky the Eiffel tower backround*hint hint* I like it, short but sweet
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Very Clever! Perfect rhyme! This Summer was one of my best. I traveled and there are many moments that I ponder now that winter has set in. Excellent take on the prompt. I wish you the best in the Comp.
Much Love & Happy Holidays ♥
Renee
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Ohhh
this rhymes, but I like it .. a lot.
I swim through memories like this so often. They are dear to me.
Thanks so much for your entry. -
very lovely.
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haha reminds me of summer past =P
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