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Lyrical L . i . e . s . . [?]

          are you one of the beautiful people [?]


everyone needs to find some who cares.
  someone so beautiful
its whats inside that counts

        just    don't    let    me    down.    <3

i wonder if it makes you want to cry[?]

i wish i could fit myself in my pocket and tie myself to a rocket and send myself to outer space.


      don't    wake  me  up    today.
back then. she wasn't so crazy.

              you shut me out


make
    me

      go

                  away.

                  [?]

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  • ToXiC-AnGeL gold member
    March 9

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    looks good so far, cant wait to see the finished piece

    would be good if you had a list of songs you used too

    Great Work Thanks for Sharing

  • I like this so far. Did you get the title from a cute is what we aim for song? I like it so far, keep it up. :]


  • RoseOfTheDamned
    December 3, 2007
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    not finished yet people!!x