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See You Again

Remember the good times,
For they are now through.
Remember a time,
With just me and you.
We went to a place
Where joy never ends.
Our hearts don't break,
They'll only bend.
We talked and we laughed,
We danced and we sang.
Too bad you have to go out
With a bang.
Ta ta, fare well,
I'll miss you, Goodbye.
I say as I walk away with a sigh.
It may take a week,
It may take a year.
But I know in my heart,
That you'll come back here.
So long for now.
Call once in a while
Just to say how you've been.
While in my heart I'll be wishing
To see you again.

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Indie Cindy

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  • innocence jaded.xx
    August 31, 2008

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    Awww, this was beautiful. I liked the unique flow to this piece. Captivating & brilliant. Thank you for the great entry & best of luck to you ! ♥


  • SageyBaby
    April 29, 2008

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    you have not read my rules, there is something you need to write in your author notes, please reread. However i absoloutly love this poem good luck


  • cricketjeff gold member
    April 25, 2008
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    A nice poem, but it doesn't suggest a sonnet to me.


  • bananasfoster42
    April 21, 2008
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    awww this is so wonderful. it's got a good flow to it. thanks for the entry!


  • sanity
    April 8, 2008

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    this is so lovely.... a love lost but wanted back..... really heart breaking.... thank you for sharing... good luck... love and hugs Linda xxxxx


  • nobodys-girl
    March 31, 2008

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    this reminds me of my best friend so much it is kinda freaky. we stopped talking for a few years but in my heart i knew it couldn't last. thankyou so much for entering my contest and good luck!


  • Walk-Free
    March 27, 2008

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    Short and sweet

    Loved how the poem sounded pained, but it had something like a PUNCH to it. Like a kick which seperates this write from the usual ones..

    I enjoyed the rhyme (:

    Congrats on the gold and BEST OF LUCK


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    February 15, 2008
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    I know that feeling, I had and sometimes still have those feelings related to Karl my ex and sometimes wanting him to turn up. It's I don't want him back, but I don't want him to forget me either, I want him to really need me, you know? It's strange.


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    February 14, 2008

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    Oh this just break my heart! Thank you so much for entering this poem into my contest! I really understand the pain you describe in this poem... this is like you talk to him/her but you also talk yourself through this. And have them phone you once in a while (the idea of this is good and helps you get through) but in real life it will bring you back to the feeling captured in this poem...

    I see poems like these as photographs... instead of seeing a picture and remembering some things, you read this and remember the emotions... Something a photograph can't always do....

    Lovely write,
    Please enter again!!!


  • greatperhaps
    January 18, 2008
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    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU WON!!!!!!!!!!!! hmhm can I put this in OCD?


  • bethan-gaze
    January 16, 2008
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    Fabulous entry - congrats on the gold!


  • Bas
    January 4, 2008

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    Beautiful

    It's nice to remember the good times and harder to think of the bad ones , our joys and our fears and tears as we walk , talk and laugh with each other together forever as we had planned a long time ago , maybe a week or a year but deep down i know that you will come back here , i feel that this has come from the heart and soul and you wish that this love you once had will come back again , thanks for sharing this with me


  • volleyballlegend10
    December 11, 2007

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    this is really good! what or who's it about? its very deep and full of emotion. i've been in this situation before. but this is really good. two thumbs up!


  • greatperhaps
    December 4, 2007

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww I love it. so cute and I agree with bridge, depth definitly there!


  • Midgetbridgey
    December 3, 2007
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    Perfecto =) its actually very deep =)

    ps. it should be a song

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