In darkness I glow,
But still you see only the dark.
I'm the color in your drawings,
But still you see only the white.
You see me plain and clear,
But choose to ignore I'm really there.
I'm just a figment of imagination
That you play with when you're bored.
I'm a body in a space
That's disappeared to you.
I'm the only blue in a sea of red,
But you haven't even seen the blue.
I'm the smile through the tears,
But you're still in love with tears.
I'm only a passing memory.
Invisible.
Author notes
I don't like this that much, but it describes how I feel around someone.
A contest entry
- What Are You Hiding? by LunaAmara.
525 points, ended December 8, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Really good description of emotion, kinda hard to read tho which was a little distracting, not sure if u put the light purple on a whie background on purpose, but the result was, reading the words make my eyes blur and they're almost invisible, so if that was the case well done hehe
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well regardless of whether or not you like this, i like the image it gives.
its very deep, and the feeling of being invisible it quite understandable. good job. good luck.
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