~D~
She is a young and affectionate
woman with a hypnotic way.
Her words speak to me
things I could not even say.
Am I dreaming in this fantasy called desire.
I admire this lady who has set my soul on fire.
~RPD~
Pencils, pads
No journey for weeping or
Crying as I am paused in a moment of
His admired news flash
~D~
Still awake in my dream of desire.
I send kisses of cherished delight her way.
Wondering in the deep places in her mind.
What thoughts persist,
for I am many years her senior.
~RPD~
Teach me
I must learn the gifts
Like grandma's secret Bayou
~D~
Hold fast to my every move sweet one.
Allow your spirit to roam in the paradise
of my charm.
For I am passion in springtime.
Awaiting your blossoming petals to unfold
into weeping leaves of ecstasy.
~RPD~
Words have been robbed out
my mind like your guessing me
Crescent in real touches
Lay in my field
Of romance and taste the temptation as
Looking in to my eyes glorifying each string
taken in meditation classes
Watch how my hair falls
The neck of elegance is
Relevant as my nature
In cover up
No need to flaunt
As the level of lower class
Real woman speak in
Aroma like wave splash
Past it all up and give discover to my channel
As I privately yearn
~D~
I hear your whisper of sheltered love
screaming to be free.
Look again into my eyes and see
the sincerity inside me.
Take my hand in faithful union
by my hearts craving trust.
On a carpet of passions ambrosial
secrets lets discover love in
sweet melodies of lust.
Author notes
I would like to personally thank my sweet
AP niece rose petal desire for collaborating with me.
She is a great talent who speaks with sincerity
and wisdom. Kisses and Hugs!
A contest entry
- LOVE: Made for Each Other by Shenanigans.
1000 points, ended December 15, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow! This is really neat. You made lust classy, quite a feat. [Aack, I hate when I accidentally rhyme.] I'm not yet sure how I feel about collaboration, but this was so good I am inclined to overlook it. The imagery is great, and such a real topic, even if it is weird/"forbidden". I like how it shows two sides of the story, and the many years senior vs. "teach me" speaks volumes about the relationship. Very excellent write, and good luck in the contest!
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thanks i was just being me and uncle gerry is a great writer thankrose desires
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great job
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uncle gerry! this was nice i totally forgotten that i even wrote this with you i wish aunt jewels could have checked this out wow are we elgible to win
we did fab
your family forever
rose -
A most wonderfully beautiful collaboration
You both did a fine job writing this piece and I wish you the very best of luck in this contest!
Bravo and kudos to you!
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